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PORCELAIN BUTTERFLIES
by John Luna
The black, loose fitting night gown stretched down to the floor while a pair of wrinkled, shaking hands tightened a sash of mustard colored cloth. Paula Willows steps were more of an early morning shuffle as she skirted around the length of the bed to the other side. The soft curls of [...]

I need some help can you guys rate my outfits ???

and if you dont like them , if u can make me an outfit, thank you so much

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